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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
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hang up

I hang up the phone immediately when she shouted on the phone.

Please correct my sentence.

I mean, by this sentence, that I finished my conversation when she started shouting on the phone while I was getting it.
  

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Hi, I hang up the phone immediately when she shouted on the phone. Please correct my sentence. I mean, by this sentence, that I finished my conversation when she started shouting on the phone while I was getting it.

— Clive

  • Hi, I hang up the phone immediately when she shouted on the phone.
  • Please correct my sentence.
  • I mean, by this sentence, that I finished my conversation when she started shouting on the phone while I was getting it.
  • I hung up the phone immediately when she shouted (on it).
  • Don't repeat words, eg 'phone', in a sentence if possible.
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Hi,

I hang up the phone immediately when she shouted on the phone.

Please correct my sentence.

I mean, by this sentence, that I finished my conversation when she started shouting on the phone while I was getting it.

I hung up the phone immediately when she shoute
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