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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Hamlet thesis

Hi, I was wondering if in any way possible someone would be willing to help me in fixing my thesis statement. My paper is about Hamlet and the psychological complexity the play shows.

Here's my thesis: Hamlet's sanity, or lack there of, helps establish how he uses deceit in order to fulfill his ambitions.
  

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Hi, I don't understand what it means to say that someone's sanity establishes how he does something . It's the word 'establish' that seems particularly unclear. Can you try to say it another way?

  • Hi, I don't understand what it means to say that someone's sanity establishes how he does something .
  • It's the word 'establish' that seems particularly unclear.
  • Can you try to say it another way?
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Hi,

I don't understand what it means to say that someone's sanity establishes how he does something.

It's the word 'establish' that seems particularly unclear.

Can you try to say it another way?

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The key word here is "how". You want to use "why". That would be the simplest way to fix this thesis.

"There of" is also one word (thereof).

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