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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Halloween
Does the sentence below sound natural?
Halloween is not only about putting on special costumes, it's also about finding a place that causes awe-inspiring feeling in us.
Halloween is not only about putting on special costumes, it's also about finding a place that causes awe-inspiring feeling in us.
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It does, however I would add an "an" before "awe-inspiring" to make it better.
- It does, however I would add an "an" before "awe-inspiring" to make it better.
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It does, however I would add an "an" before "awe-inspiring" to make it better.
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BAYRAM ERDEM Does the sentence below sound natural?No, it doesn't.
1- A place doesn't cause a feeling in someone.
2- A feeling is not typically described as "awe-inspiring."
BAYRAM ERDEMabout finding a placeWhat do you mean by "place?"
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It's not entirely clear what you are trying to say.
Halloween is not only about putting on special costumes, it's also about finding an awe-inspiring place (within ourselves?).
Halloween is not only about putting on special costumes, it's also about finding a place of awe.
You may also try experimenting with the use of the word 'dread' instead of 'awe'.
Halloween is not only about putting on special costumes, it's also about finding an awe-inspiring place (within ourselves?).
Halloween is not only about putting on special costumes, it's also about finding a place of awe.
You may also try experimenting with the use of the word 'dread' instead of 'awe'.
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