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OttoJ Posted 12 years ago
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Half of the book is devoted
-Half of the book is devoted to dealing with A Collection of Dynasty Stories.
-The analyses of A Collection of Dynasty Stories occupy half the book.
-Half the book consists of analyses of A Collection of Dynasty Stories.
Are my sentence structures correct? Thank you.
-The analyses of A Collection of Dynasty Stories occupy half the book.
-Half the book consists of analyses of A Collection of Dynasty Stories.
Are my sentence structures correct? Thank you.
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I think it would be clearer if you gave more information, for example : Half of the book is devoted to ..... (include what the book does) analyzing ... J Smith's A Collection of Dynasty Stories.
- I think it would be clearer if you gave more information, for example : Half of the book is devoted to .....
- (include what the book does) analyzing ...
- J Smith's A Collection of Dynasty Stories.
- Dealing with is too general in my opinion.
- Hope this helps.
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I think it would be clearer if you gave more information, for example : Half of the book is devoted to ..... (include what the book does) analyzing ... A.J Smith's A Collection of Dynasty Stories. Dealing with is too general in my opinion. Hope this helps.
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