Hair manages to..

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Hair manages to remove the bullet lodged in Ella, ultimately stop her bleeding and creates a makeshift treatment room at the loyalists hideout. Marco is making his preparations to face the inevitable attack by the loyalists. Meanwhile, the wedding between Zehan and Faz proceeds as requested by Ella. As the wedding ends, the loyalists gather to plan their all-out attack on Marco’s island.