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Bubr Posted 22 years ago
Haiku
The name I had trampled on snow
Has been covered with newborn white fuzz.
Write another?
Has been covered with newborn white fuzz.
Write another?
Top answer
Noice. But it's not a haiku, Bubr.
- Noice.
- But it's not a haiku, Bubr.
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Yes, I can find two reasons for that and guess about one more.
First, my poem is not purely observational, there is some sence in it ('Write another?' - a hint on a whole story).
Second, number of syllables is not right: a classical haiku has 7-syllables in the 1-st and 2-nd lines and 5-syllables in the 3-rd.
Maybe there are some other restrictions on form I can o
First, my poem is not purely observational, there is some sence in it ('Write another?' - a hint on a whole story).
Second, number of syllables is not right: a classical haiku has 7-syllables in the 1-st and 2-nd lines and 5-syllables in the 3-rd.
Maybe there are some other restrictions on form I can o
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You have already explained why.
P.S. I sent my Pstpostmodern Christmas poem ( The Englsish version) to Carlsberg's PR manager to Italy.
P.S. I sent my Pstpostmodern Christmas poem ( The Englsish version) to Carlsberg's PR manager to Italy.
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Yeah, that's funny! Tell us about the results. Or, I guess, we will not escape knowing it from the media
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You can send it to Carlsberg Russia and we'll make it fifty- fifty. Or to Putin, an wll changing the ladst line to: And you sir, are the best man in the world.
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