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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Had seen.

she looked up and had seen that we have walked in and were waiting to be seated, but just went on and minded her business. she then finally told us to sit.

Please correct this sentence for me. Thank you.

My own corrections:

She looked up and saw that we had walked in and were waiting to be seated, but just went on and minded her business. She then finally told us to sit.
  

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i guess instead of "we had walked in", "we had already walked in" or "we went in" would be better.

  • i guess instead of "we had walked in", "we had already walked in" or "we went in" would be better.
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i guess instead of "we had walked in", "we had already walked in" or "we went in" would be better.

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