I agree that the past perfect verb is in the wrong clause.
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pructusHer removal indeed was so abrupt that she had resolved never to return.The past time which serves as the reference point for the use of a past perfect need not be in the same sentence as the past perfect itself. It just has to be somewhere in the text, though occasionally it is implicit.