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Necrophagist Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Had been or was

Before he became president, he had been a man who had been loved by his people.

1. Is the bolded part grammatically correct?

2. Can I use was instead? In my mind, was sounds correct because I've already emphasized the sequence of events by saying "he had been a man". Am I right?

  

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Natural English is eg Before he became president, he was a man who was loved by his people. The word ' after ' ,makes the sequence clear.

  • Natural English is eg Before he became president, he was a man who was loved by his people.
  • The word ' after ' ,makes the sequence clear.
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Natural English is eg Before he became president, he was a man who was loved by his people.

The word 'after' ,makes the sequence clear.

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