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Ziawj2 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Guiding me marching on my road

Are these two sentences acceptable to native speakers? Thank you!

Ever since I was born, you are an everlasing shinning star, guiding me marching on my road when I take every step forward.

Ever since I was born, you have been an everlasting star, guiding me marching on the my road with every step I take.
  

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This is OK: Ever since I was born, you have been an everlasting star, guiding me in every step I take as I march down my road.

— Mister Micawber

  • This is OK: Ever since I was born, you have been an everlasting star, guiding me in every step I take as I march down my road.
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This is OK:

Ever since I was born, you have been an everlasting star, guiding me in every step I take as I march down my road.
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Mister MicawberThis is OK: Ever since I was born, you have been an everlasting star, guiding me in every step I take as I march down my road.
Thank you for your revision!
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