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JulesVerne Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

>PLEASE< read over my internship reference [_URGENT_] (but no huge errors!)

Hi all,

I would be really grateful for your help. This is a draft of my internship reference I wrote by myself. On Monday morning I must give it to my boss to get her signature.

Please read through it and correct the errors you find. There shouldn't be big errors.

Please tell me if there is something wrong in general with it, too.

It has to be perfect a 100%!

Sorry, but it's really urgent, too!!!

THANK YOU very much for your help and your opinion!

Greets Jules Verne

To whom it may concern:

This is to confirm that Jules Verne, born on XX April 19XX, was employed as an intern in the Corporate Purchase Department of XXX Communications Ltd. in UUUUU from 20 July 2005 until 03 October 2005.

XXX Ltd. was established in May 1993 as a Sino-German joint venture between XX Limited China and three Chinese partners including X Ltd., Y Ltd. and Z. Our business scope is the development, the manufacturing and the providing of services for a wide range of mobile communication systems and mobile handsets for the Chinese as well as for the global market.

During his time with us, Mr. Verne worked on the following tasks:

- Support of the department managers during the examination and evaluation of purchase orders for goods and services
- Collecting and editing information for internal decision papers to compare quotes submitted by the company's suppliers
- Working with the Materials Management module of SAP R/3 software
- Assisting during the implementation process of a new e-bidding and e-auctioning software that assures a maximum of automation providing more transparency and faster handling of the buying procedure
- Business correspondence in English, German and Italian

Mr. Verne did his job very conscientiously and independently. He approached his tasks in a goal-oriented manner and even in critical situations or under time pressure he worked systematically and efficiently. We were fully satisfied with his quantitative and qualitative success.

We got to know Mr. Verne as a very friendly and helpful colleague.

We would like to thank Mr. Verne for his contribution and wish him every success in his personal and professional career for the future.

  

Top answer

It looks very good to me, I cannot think of any improvements that could be made. Well done. Someone more professional than me may be able to spot something.

  • It looks very good to me, I cannot think of any improvements that could be made.
  • Well done.
  • Someone more professional than me may be able to spot something.
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It looks very good to me, I cannot think of any improvements that could be made.

Well done.

Someone more professional than me may be able to spot something.
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Hi,

thank you Robyn Terri for your help!!

@ Mr. Mister Micawber, nona the brit: may I hear your opinion, too? That would be very nice! Thank you

Greets,

JV

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