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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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grueling concert tour
Is the wording of the following sentences acceptable and natural?
At this point, a greedy producer, Ian Hawke, intends to exploit "the boys", and sends them to participate in the grueling concert tour.
At this point, a greedy producer, Ian Hawke, intends to exploit "the boys", and sends them to participate in the grueling concert tour.
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At this point, a greedy producer, Ian Hawke, intends to exploit "the boys", and he sends them to participate in the grueling concert tour. Or, you could just delete the comma between 'boys' and 'sends'. I think it reads better with the little addition.
- At this point, a greedy producer, Ian Hawke, intends to exploit "the boys", and he sends them to participate in the grueling concert tour.
- Or, you could just delete the comma between 'boys' and 'sends'.
- I think it reads better with the little addition.
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contiluo Is the wording of the following sentences acceptable and natural?At this point, a greedy producer, Ian Hawke, intends to exploit "the boys", and he sends them to participate in the grueling concert tour.Or, you could just delete the comma between 'boys' and 'sends'. I think it reads better with the little a
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