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Nicetomeetyou Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
grow up and?
After the following sentence, which sentence flows more naturally?
Children are encouraged to have as much experience as possible.
A) When they grow up and face a variety of hardships, such an experience will be surprisingly helpful.
B) When they grow up, such an experience will be surprisingly helpful when they face a variety of hardships.
Children are encouraged to have as much experience as possible.
A) When they grow up and face a variety of hardships, such an experience will be surprisingly helpful.
B) When they grow up, such an experience will be surprisingly helpful when they face a variety of hardships.
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'An experience' is inappropriate in both sentences. When they grow up and face a variety of hardships, such experience will be surprisingly helpful. When they grow up, such experience will be surprisingly helpful when they face a variety of hardships .
- 'An experience' is inappropriate in both sentences.
- When they grow up and face a variety of hardships, such experience will be surprisingly helpful.
- When they grow up, such experience will be surprisingly helpful when they face a variety of hardships .
- nicetomeetyou which sentence flows more naturally?
- I see no advantage of one over the other.
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'An experience' is inappropriate in both sentences.
When they grow up and face a variety of hardships, such experience will be surprisingly helpful.
When they grow up, such experience will be surprisingly helpful when they face a variety of hardships.
When they grow up and face a variety of hardships, such experience will be surprisingly helpful.
When they grow up, such experience will be surprisingly helpful when they face a variety of hardships.
nicetomeetyou which sentence flows more naturally?I see no advantage o
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Thank you very much. Is it also okay to use 'this kind of experience' instead of 'such experience?'
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nicetomeetyou. Is it also okay to use 'this kind of experience'No, because no kind of experience has been indicated.
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