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Coquette Posted 8 years ago
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The golden rule of life once existed among the indigenous peoples of the North, Far East and Amur River. From time immemorial, fishermen, hunters and the Evens of the Okhotsk, Kamchatka, Sakhalin, Amur River have settled with clan and family communities. A large animal brought by a hunter, for example, a walrus or moose, was divided among the whole camp - no one was left hungry ... Today, traditions, experienced by time come back to the Amur people. The tribal communities of fishermen are a perfect form for the full life and work of indigenous peoples.

  

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coquette The golden rule of life once existed among the indigenous peoples of the North, Far East and Amur River. From time immemorial, fishermen, hunters and the Evens of the Okhotsk, Kamchatka, Sakhalin, Amur River have settled lived wit hin clan and family closely knit communities. A large animal brought by a hunter, for example, a walrus or a moose, was divided among the whole camp - no one was left hungr y.

  • coquette The golden rule of life once existed among the indigenous peoples of the North, Far East and Amur River.
  • From time immemorial, fishermen, hunters and the Evens of the Okhotsk, Kamchatka, Sakhalin, Amur River have settled lived wit hin clan and family closely knit communities.
  • A large animal brought by a hunter, for example, a walrus or a moose, was divided among the whole camp - no one was left hungr y.
  • Today, traditions, experienced by time have come back to the Amur people.
  • The tribal communities of fishermen are a perfect form for the full life and work of indigenous peoples.
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coquette The golden rule of life once existed among the indigenous peoples of the North, Far East and Amur River. From time immemorial, fishermen, hunters and the Evens of the Okhotsk, Kamchatka, Sakhalin, Amur River have settled lived

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