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In two decades at our head enterprise we have created several subsidiaries, built two fish processing plants, provided our production with the necessary amount of refrigeration capacities and the latest equipment.
Every year we improve our production. A special purchase for us is "Vitaly Sheiko". This is a modern vessel for a wide fishing range. We conduct our own fishing in the sea and take the catch from other enterprises.
We mastered the shrimp fishery on the "Vitaly Sheiko" vessel in the Tatar Strait. Trawler works in the water area of ??the ??Okhotsk Sea, as well as in the Kamchatka and Primorsky Territory.
We provide jobs in the autumn-summer period for more than 1000 Khabarovsk residents.
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The writing is very good. Okhotsk Sea, as well as in the Kamchatka and Primorsky Territory. We provide jobs from autumn through summer for more than 1000 Khabarovsk residents.
- The writing is very good.
- Okhotsk Sea, as well as in the Kamchatka and Primorsky Territory.
- We provide jobs from autumn through summer for more than 1000 Khabarovsk residents.
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The writing is very good. I made two changes for you:
We mastered the shrimp fishery on the "Vitaly Sheiko" vessel in the Tatar Strait, Trawler works in the water area of ??the ??Okhotsk Sea, as well as in the Kamchatka and Primorsky Territory.
We provide jobs from autumn through summer for
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