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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Greeting
Hi,
Pls help to check the grammar of the following greeting which I'd like to write to my friend's son on her birthday.
" Time flies that it's your 3 years old birthday! We're so pleased to be invited to join your birthday party, little Denny. Happy Birthday and we wish you all the very best, healthy, brilliant and joyous always!"
Pls help to check the grammar of the following greeting which I'd like to write to my friend's son on her birthday.
" Time flies that it's your 3 years old birthday! We're so pleased to be invited to join your birthday party, little Denny. Happy Birthday and we wish you all the very best, healthy, brilliant and joyous always!"
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If I was your friend, I think I'd rather have a lovely personal message like this in your own words than one that had been rewritten by someone else in completely correct English. Just my opinion.
- If I was your friend, I think I'd rather have a lovely personal message like this in your own words than one that had been rewritten by someone else in completely correct English.
- Just my opinion.
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If I was your friend, I think I'd rather have a lovely personal message like this in your own words than one that had been rewritten by someone else in completely correct English. Just my opinion.
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Hi,
Pls help to check the grammar of the following greeting which I'd like to write to my friend's son on his birthday.
" Time flies that it's your 3 years old birthday! We're so pleased to be invited to join your birthday party, little Denny, and we're happy to see you growing up to be more and more charm, bright and smart. Happy Birthday and we wish you all the very best,
Pls help to check the grammar of the following greeting which I'd like to write to my friend's son on his birthday.
" Time flies that it's your 3 years old birthday! We're so pleased to be invited to join your birthday party, little Denny, and we're happy to see you growing up to be more and more charm, bright and smart. Happy Birthday and we wish you all the very best,
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