john, I wanted to say something like ' with great power comes great responsibility.' But it sure does not sound good.That is why I asked the Question here. Hope It wasnt that much trouble for you guys.
"with great power comes great responsibility" is perfectly good English and it sounds absolutely fine.
It is much better than your original proposal, that of Suresh, or mine.
As a native English speaker and TEFL teacher, I advise you strongly to say, "with great power comes great responsibility" or "with great power comes greater responsibility".
I am deeply touched by the efforts that you put here to clear the confusions.I am struggling to learn English and finding it very hard to cope up with it, since it is not my first language.Main problem I face to pick up the words.It is like I know the synonymous of a particular word well enough, But I simply cant use it at the right time.And it gets even tougher, when I