It isn't right, and I don't exactly understand what you are trying to say. "Granted (that) X, but Y" requires a contrast such that X partly mitigates Y, but not fully, as in "Granted you're trying, but the results aren't good enough". I can't work out what you mean by "you supposed to finish the school at some point" that would provide the necessary connection with the second part of the sentence.
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