Hey someone correct my following sentence, please " Of all the grandchildren I loved you most" "Rest in peace, May God reward you eternal bliss. I will meet you in the heaven, I promise. Grandma Love you always."
Best wishes, Trouper
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Use "my" grandchildren ; Comma after grandchildren ; Periods after most and peace ; Add "with" before eternal ; Period after Grandma .
— Avangi
Use "my" grandchildren ; Comma after grandchildren ; Periods after most and peace ; Add "with" before eternal ; Period after Grandma .
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Dear avangi Actually This message is for my deceased grannie so I should use "Your" if I'm not mistaken. "Of all your grandchildren, I loved you most."
Well you are correct. I'm not sure whether my cousins loved her more than me. Ok why not i should put like this "Of all your grandchildren, I believe I loved you most." You know its just a letter. No one would view it unless I want it to. So, It really doesnt matter if they(my cousins) loved her less or more.
Thank you so much for your sorry. It's ok. I feel much better than yesterday. She died on monday morning. Time and age? I couldn't be confirmed. Anyway, Once again Thank you both grammargeek and avangi.
Please take care after yourself Best wishes, Trouper