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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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I came out on the museum of natural history and was crossing the street on mine way to the subway if I saw the crowd about halfway down the block,or the police cars too. I can hear the whine of a approaching ambulance. But I walked on.
  

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I have underlined the problems. Please revise and repost your paragraph. I came out on the museum of natural history and was crossing the street on mine way to the subway if I saw the crowd about halfway down the block, or the police cars too.

  • I have underlined the problems.
  • Please revise and repost your paragraph.
  • I came out on the museum of natural history and was crossing the street on mine way to the subway if I saw the crowd about halfway down the block, or the police cars too.
  • I can hear the whine of a approaching ambulance.
  • But I walked on.
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I have underlined the problems. Please revise and repost your paragraph.

I came out on the museum of natural history and was crossing the street on mine way to the subway if I saw the crowd about halfway down the block,or the police cars too. I can hear the whine of a approaching ambulance. But I walked on.
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I came out in the museum of natural history and was crossing the street on _my_way to the subway_but if_I saw _a_crowd about halfway down the block and the police cars too. I could hear the whine of _an_approaching ambulance. But I walked on.

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