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Ben9108 Posted 21 years ago
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In response to your company’s e-mail concerning my request of a paper stock certificate. I appreciate that your company has furnished two options for solving my request, but the options should take a long processing time. Besides this, I found another option, which is shown on the following steps, in your company’s webpage. However, I have a question about the following option that a paper stock certificate will be sent to me after completing the following steps. Would you please help me clarify is the following option right to my request?
1. Go to www.ABC.com
2. Click on “Account Access”
3. Enter issue ID no.: XXXXX
4. Enter Account No.# XXXXXXXX
5. Password: XXXXXX
6. Go to Transactions
7. Go to Issue Book-Entry Shares (By selecting one of the buttons on the left, you will be requesting an issuance of your book-entry shares. Your shares will be issued according to the terms of the Investment Plan or DRS documentation, generally within 2 business days of your request. Your certificate will be mailed to your address on our records.)
8. Choose “Issue a stock Certificate for XX shares.”
9. Click on “Submit Issue”
1. Go to www.ABC.com
2. Click on “Account Access”
3. Enter issue ID no.: XXXXX
4. Enter Account No.# XXXXXXXX
5. Password: XXXXXX
6. Go to Transactions
7. Go to Issue Book-Entry Shares (By selecting one of the buttons on the left, you will be requesting an issuance of your book-entry shares. Your shares will be issued according to the terms of the Investment Plan or DRS documentation, generally within 2 business days of your request. Your certificate will be mailed to your address on our records.)
8. Choose “Issue a stock Certificate for XX shares.”
9. Click on “Submit Issue”
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Hi, I'll try. Here is my version. Please check to ensure that I haven't changed your meaning.
- Hi, I'll try.
- Here is my version.
- Please check to ensure that I haven't changed your meaning.
- I am replying to your company’s e-mail concerning my request of a paper stock certificate.
- I appreciate that your company has furnished two options for solving my request, but these would both involve a long processing time.
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Hi,
I'll try. Here is my version. Please check to ensure that I haven't changed your meaning.
I am replying to your company’s e-mail concerning my request of a paper stock certificate. I appreciate that your company has furnished two options for solving my request, but these would both involve a long processing time. Besides thes
I'll try. Here is my version. Please check to ensure that I haven't changed your meaning.
I am replying to your company’s e-mail concerning my request of a paper stock certificate. I appreciate that your company has furnished two options for solving my request, but these would both involve a long processing time. Besides thes
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Thank you so much for your reply.
I have a question for the following sentence because my english is not enough.
"Will a paper stock certificate will be sent to me after completing these steps."
Is it correct in grammatical structure of the following ? Why?
I have a question for the following sentence because my english is not enough.
"Will a paper stock certificate will be sent to me after completing these steps."
Is it correct in grammatical structure of the following ? Why?
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Hi,
"Will a paper stock certificate will be sent to me after completing these steps."
I suggest "Will a paper stock certificate be sent to me if I complete these steps?"
Clive
"Will a paper stock certificate will be sent to me after completing these steps."
I suggest "Will a paper stock certificate be sent to me if I complete these steps?"
Clive
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