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Farhanullah Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

Grammer check

Hi all,
I wrote this reply to my prospective supervisor. Is it grammatically correct? help me

Dear Prof. xxxx,

Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my email and considering my request. All of your research area fascinates me and I would be happy to contribute any of these ongoing projects.
It would be an honor to work with you and your research group. I look forward to further discuss this matter after your return from South Africa.
Thank you again for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
xxxx
  

Top answer

1- to read my email and consider (not considering) my request. 2- all of your research areas fascinate me (plural instead of singular). 3- to work with you and within your research group.

— Abdelboura

  • 1- to read my email and consider (not considering) my request.
  • 2- all of your research areas fascinate me (plural instead of singular).
  • 3- to work with you and within your research group.
  • 4- I'm looking forward to discuss this matter ....
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1- to read my email and consider (not considering) my request.
2- all of your research areas fascinate me (plural instead of singular).
3- to work with you and within your research group.
4- I'm looking forward to discuss this matter ....
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abdelboura4- I'm looking forward to discuss this matter
That is not a possible structure. 'Look forward to doing...' is correct.
abdelboura2- all of your research areas fascinate me (plural instead of singular).
That is an unusual supposition. Researchers normally have a single area.
abdelboura
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@Mister Micawber is it correct then? my english is weak. i cant figure it out
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It could use revision, farhanullah:

Dear Prof. xxxx,

Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to consider my request.

Your research area fascinates me, and I am eager to contribute to any of your ongoing projects. It would be an honor to work with you and your research group. I look forward to further discussing this possibility after your retu
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Mister MicawberIt could use revision, farhanullah:Dear Prof. xxxx,Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to consider my request.Your research area fascinates me, and I am eager to contribute to any of your ongoing projects. It would be an honor to work with you and your research group. I look forward to further discussing this possibility after your return from
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