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GUGGI Posted 14 years ago
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Through combining market demand trend with the development of functional textile technology, reducing time of new product development, accelerating time-to-market, the competitiveness of our textile industry could be enhanced effectively.

From American's viewpoint, is there any obvious mistake in this paragraph? THX~
  

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GUGGI Through combining market demand trend with the development of functional textile technology, reducing time of new product development, accelerating time-to-market, the competitiveness of our textile industry could be enhanced effectively. I would revise it as shown below, as a first step. The competitiveness of our textile industry could be effectively enhanced by combining the market demand trend with the development of functional textile technology, reducing the time required for new product development, and accelerating time-to-market.

— CalifJim

  • GUGGI Through combining market demand trend with the development of functional textile technology, reducing time of new product development, accelerating time-to-market, the competitiveness of our textile industry could be enhanced effectively.
  • I would revise it as shown below, as a first step.
  • The competitiveness of our textile industry could be effectively enhanced by combining the market demand trend with the development of functional textile technology, reducing the time required for new product development, and accelerating time-to-market.
  • Further revisions may be necessary.
  • CJ
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GUGGIThrough combining market demand trend with the development of functional textile technology, reducing time of new product development, accelerating time-to-market, the competitiveness of our textile industry could be enhanced effectively.
I would revise it as shown below, as a first step.

The competitiveness of our textile industry could be effec
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