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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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With reference to the above mentioned subject, we are informing you that due to a major maintenance job on our service provider’s plant, Al Hamra Mall power will be shut down for a period of 13 days starting from 18 September 2011 to 30 September 2011.

During this period we will be running the mall on our backup generator without any additional cost charging to the tenants. Could you please take precautions to protect your equipment from unexpected power fluctuation or failure.

Thank you for your cooperation and understanding as this matter is out of our control.
  

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Too many useless words!! This is an important announcement: be clear and direct: D ue to major maintenance on our service provider’s plant, Al Hamra Mall power will be shut down for 13 days from 18 to 30 September . During this period we will be running the mall on our backup generator without any additional charge to tenants .

  • Too many useless words!!
  • This is an important announcement: be clear and direct: D ue to major maintenance on our service provider’s plant, Al Hamra Mall power will be shut down for 13 days from 18 to 30 September .
  • During this period we will be running the mall on our backup generator without any additional charge to tenants .
  • Please take precautions to protect your equipment from unexpected power fluctuation or failure.
  • Thank you for your cooperation and understanding.
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Too many useless words!! This is an important announcement: be clear and direct:

Due to major maintenance on our service provider’s plant, Al Hamra Mall power will be shut down for 13 days from 18 to 30 September. During this period we will be running the mall on our backup generator without any additional charge to tenants. Plea

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