Grammer

It's not clear who received the payment and who is going to receive the delivery.

It almost sounds as if both are the same people, which doesn't make sense to me.

CJ

Hi,

Having received the payment now, kindly let us know when to proceed with delivery

is above sentence correct? No. The first phrase is not connected properly to 'us'.

I suggest

eg We have now received your payment. Kindly let

Thank you Clive.


Please be informed that we did not publish the job ad which was scheduled to publish on 24th September as we did not receive the payment on last Monday and following 4 days were public holidays for us .Since our bank was closed on those 4 days we could not confirm your payment. We have now received the payment. kindly let us know on which day's edition should be proc

Hi,

Please be informed that we did not publish the job ad which was scheduled to publish on 24th September as we did not receive the payment on last Monday and following 4 days were public holidays for us .Since our bank was closed on those 4 days we could not confirm your payment. We have now received the payment. kindly let us know on which day's edition should be proceed the publicatio

1.why IN WHICH DAY'S instead of ON WHICH DAY'S?

2.Is the connection of the sentences .Since our bank was closed... ok?

Thank you very much Clive.

Hi,

1.why IN WHICH DAY'S instead of ON WHICH DAY'S?

The full phrase is in which day's edition, ie in the edition for which day?

We say 'in an edition', not 'on an edition'

Thank you for your help Clive.