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Hitchiker Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Grammer

1.Please note that rates will be revised upone the lauching of our new website.

Is above sentence grammatically correct and is vocubulary ok? please correct the mistakes
  

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hitchiker Please note that rates will be revised upon the lau n ching of our new website. As shown. CJ

  • hitchiker Please note that rates will be revised upon the lau n ching of our new website.
  • As shown.
  • CJ
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hitchikerPlease note that rates will be revised upon the launching of our new website.
As shown.

CJ
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Please note that rates will be revised upon the launching of our new website.

Is this the most appropriate way to write this type of sentence and is vocublary used in the sentence ok.
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The sentence I gave you is fine. Don't worry. Emotion: smile

CJ
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"Upon the lauching"

Is it ok to use or is there any other way that i could tell that rates will be revised when the new website is launched. When " Upon the lauching ' means regarding our lauching of new website and it doesnt really tell that rates of ad slots on new website are different.

tell me
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I've already corrected your spelling. It's launching, not lauching. And you spelled it wrong again.
hitchikerIs it ok to use or is there any other way that i could tell that rates will be revised when the new website is launched.
1. It is OK to use.
2. There are probably a hundred different ways to say just about anything. You only asked abo

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