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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Can you please inform me if the below is correct? If no then please indicate to me the correct way.

We acknowledge receipt of your correspondence dated 22nd April, 2010 and teachers’ letter dated 23rd April, 2010 regarding Leave Without Pay for the above-named within the Catholic Public Schools Management with effect from:



· 31st August, 1984 to 1st September, 1985 and

· 1st December, 1985 to 5th January, 1986





Thanks in advance,

PS. Where will I see your response and how long will it take?
  

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Hi, I suggest this. We acknowledge receipt of your correspondence dated 22 nd April, 2010 and the teachers’ letter dated 23 rd April, 2010, both regarding Leave Without Pay for the above-named within the Catholic Public Schools Management , with effect from: · 31 st August, 1984 to 1 st September, 1985 and · 1 st December, 1985 to 5 th January, 1986 Thanks. PS.

  • Hi, I suggest this.
  • We acknowledge receipt of your correspondence dated 22 nd April, 2010 and the teachers’ letter dated 23 rd April, 2010, both regarding Leave Without Pay for the above-named within the Catholic Public Schools Management , with effect from: · 31 st August, 1984 to 1 st September, 1985 and · 1 st December, 1985 to 5 th January, 1986 Thanks.
  • PS.
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Hi,



I suggest this.



We acknowledge receipt of your correspondence dated 22nd April, 2010 and the teachers’ letter dated 23rd April, 2010, both regarding Leave Without Pay for the above-named within the Catholic Public Schools Management, with effect from:

· 31st August, 1984 to 1s
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It looks like you are translating from a language that uses much more formal style, and longer more cumbersome sentences. Without knowing the context, I would say that the style is much too confusing to be acceptable in American Standard English. You mention the teachers' letter. Does this mean that the instructors at the school submitted a letter signed by them all, is it a letter written by

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