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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Grammatically correct?
Hi teachers
Are these sentences grammatically correct?
"He took note of the police records kept upon the deceased’s second admission to the Kiziltepe State Hospital, according to which the deceased had declared that she had been beaten by her father. "
"They submitted that the hospitals involved had differed in the treatment administered and diagnosis as a result of which they alleged that their daughter had died. "
I found them a little awkward. What do you think?
Are these sentences grammatically correct?
"He took note of the police records kept upon the deceased’s second admission to the Kiziltepe State Hospital, according to which the deceased had declared that she had been beaten by her father. "
"They submitted that the hospitals involved had differed in the treatment administered and diagnosis as a result of which they alleged that their daughter had died. "
I found them a little awkward. What do you think?
Top answer
He noted the police records for the deceased’s second admission to Kiziltep e State Hospital, in which the deceased declared that she had been beaten by her father. They alleged that their daughter had died because the diagnosis and treatment by the hospitals involved had differed.
- He noted the police records for the deceased’s second admission to Kiziltep e State Hospital, in which the deceased declared that she had been beaten by her father.
- They alleged that their daughter had died because the diagnosis and treatment by the hospitals involved had differed.
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He noted the police records for the deceased’s second admission to Kiziltepe State Hospital, in which the deceased declared that she had been beaten by her father.
They alleged that their daughter had died because the diagnosis and treatment by the hospitals involved had differed.
They alleged that their daughter had died because the diagnosis and treatment by the hospitals involved had differed.
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