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Glaycon Posted 13 years ago
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They do not make good role models because their role in society is so insignificant that they do not greatly effect our world as much as doctors, who save millions of lives, teachers, who educate the future of this country, or the mother with two jobs working tirelessly so that she can send her two children to University.
  

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Hello, glaycon—and welcome to English Forums They do not make good role mode ls. Their role in society is insignificant: th ey do not affect our world as much as do doctors, who save millions of lives, teachers, who educate the future of this country, or mothers with two jobs working tirelessly so that they can send their children to university.

  • Hello, glaycon—and welcome to English Forums They do not make good role mode ls.
  • Their role in society is insignificant: th ey do not affect our world as much as do doctors, who save millions of lives, teachers, who educate the future of this country, or mothers with two jobs working tirelessly so that they can send their children to university.
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Hello, glaycon—and welcome to English Forums

They do not make good role models. Their role in society is insignificant: they do not affect our world as much as do doctors, who save millions of lives, teachers, who educate the future of this country, or mothers with two jobs working tirelessly so that they can send their children to u

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