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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

grammatical problem

I wonder whether these sentences have any grammatical problem or not !?by the way I wrote it as an introduction of my essay.

My Ideal Life Partner



Most of The young believe to love somebody would guarantee a long bliss marital



life. Although to some extent it is true but not at all.To have an ideal wife there are some



other factors that must be consider such as physical features,intelligence,and coincidence.











  

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Hi, My Ideal Life Partner Most young people believe that loving somebody guarantees a long and blissful married life. To some extent this is true, but not completely. To have an ideal spouse, there are some other factors that must be considered, such as physical features, intelligence and coincidence.

  • Hi, My Ideal Life Partner Most young people believe that loving somebody guarantees a long and blissful married life.
  • To some extent this is true, but not completely.
  • To have an ideal spouse, there are some other factors that must be considered, such as physical features, intelligence and coincidence.
  • I don't think 'coincidence' correctly conveys your meaning here.
  • Do you perhaps mean that they must share the same likes and dislikes?
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Hi,

My Ideal Life Partner

Most young people believe that loving somebody guarantees a long and blissful married life. To some extent this is true, but not completely. To have an ideal spouse, there are some other factors that must be considered, such as physical features, intelligence and coincidence.

I don't think 'coincidence' correctly conveys

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