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In the past few years, we have seen the rapid movement of 2G and 3G system in cellular networks, which moves to Third Generation Partnership Project (3GPP) Long Term Evolution (LTE) for the next generation wireless system. LTE featuring increased higher capacity, lower air-interface latency, the availability of high data rate video services at high user velocities. The demand of video services growing rapidly over LTE, as it also demand the Quality of Service (QoS)

which is the most challenging issues. This Master’s thesis investigates the effects of QoS associated with video streaming over LTE.

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Long-Term Evolution (LTE) has received widespread attention in recent times due to the escalating of mobile data usage in the context of streaming media, such as mobile video blogging, interactive TV and multimedia online gaming (MMOG). This research aims to analyze the effects of QoS associated scheduling strategies on the performance of video conferencing over LTE. It uses as its exemplar the performance on when delivering video conferencing traffic over a non-GBR and GBR bearers. To interact with downlink (DL) and uplink (UL) scenarios for video conferencing including web traffic which are taken from the simulation in OPNET.

This study would be credibly an empirical work which ends up with further research proposition.
  

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Hi, You have quite a lot of problems, and this is not an easy text to correct because it is very technical, and because of your 'centred formatting'. Here are are just a few edits and comments. In the past few years, we have seen the rapid movement of 2G and 3G system s in cellular networks, which moves <<<<plural verb?

  • Hi, You have quite a lot of problems, and this is not an easy text to correct because it is very technical, and because of your 'centred formatting'.
  • Here are are just a few edits and comments.
  • In the past few years, we have seen the rapid movement of 2G and 3G system s in cellular networks, which moves <<<<plural verb?
  • Why Simple Present?
  • to Third Generation Partnership Project (3GPP) and Long Term Evolution (LTE) for the next generation of wireless system.
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Hi,

You have quite a lot of problems, and this is not an easy text to correct because it is very technical, and because of your 'centred formatting'.

Here are are just a few edits and comments.

In the past few years, we have seen the rapid movement of 2G and 3G

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