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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

grammatical mistakes

Hi

Please help me with the grammatical mistakes in this paragraph.

Today, most of the children spend a lot of time with social networking service such as Face book, Twitter etc. This affects their health and their studies. As they sit chatting with their friends on SNS, they hardly do anything to keep their body fit. They find it hard to cover say even 500 meters on foot. And, as they fancy eating junk food as they sit before their computers, they run the risk of becoming obese.
  

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Today, most of the children spend a lot of time with social networking service s (SNS) such as Facebook , Twitter etc. This affects their health and their studies. As they sit chatting with their friends on an SNS, they hardly do anything to keep their body fit.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Today, most of the children spend a lot of time with social networking service s (SNS) such as Facebook , Twitter etc.
  • This affects their health and their studies.
  • As they sit chatting with their friends on an SNS, they hardly do anything to keep their body fit.
  • They find it hard to walk/run say even 500 meters on foot .
  • And, as they fancy eating junk food as they sit before their computers, they run the risk of becoming obese.
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Today, most of the children spend a lot of time with social networking services (SNS) such as Facebook, Twitter etc. This affects their health and their studies. As they sit chatting with their friends on an
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Thank you AlpheccaStars.
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