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Ronctlsmile Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Grammatical mistakes !?

Hey guys, any grammatical mistakes in the following sentence?

our work should be extended to compute the pricing of multi-asset options, such as basket options, and exotic options, such as barrier options and asian options, which are valued according to pre-determined price requirements for their underlying assets.

In the highlighted sentence, can I change to 1.) barrier and asian options or 2.) a barrier option and a asian option.

Can you guys explain what mistakes I made? I feel like writing in "Chin"glish ate the moment. Haha! Thanks!

Cheers
Ron
  

Top answer

Hi, You need to add appropriate capital letters. They are always essential. I'd use your alternative #1.

  • Hi, You need to add appropriate capital letters.
  • They are always essential.
  • I'd use your alternative #1.
  • Clive
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Hi,



You need to add appropriate capital letters. They are always essential.



I'd use your alternative #1.



Clive
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Hi, Ron. The note says this is your first post, but I seem to recall another first post yesterday. But welcome again, anyway! [<:o)]

I think you need a second variety of punctuation here:
the pricing of A options, such as X, and B options, such as Y and Z,

Personally, I'd use parentheses:
the pricing of A options (such as X), and B options (such as Y and
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Thanks everyone. Here is my question:

If I am going to take alternative 1, would people think the "option" I am describing is only one option which have two adjective asian and barrier to describe it? Obviously, what I am describing is two different kinds of options, one called asian and the other one called barrier.

What is the criterion on judging this siutation?

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ronctlsmile1.) This method is fairly accurate and "is" able to be modified easily.

Shoule I keep "is" or not. What is the rule of it?

This is my take:

To me,

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