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Ean Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Grammatical Errors
Hello,
I have composed a reason-based article for a competition submission. I'd like to have someone to help me to look for any grammatical error in this document.
The submission :
I came across an idea, where I had Wixlab and Wix in the bushes (which those bushes were actually flowers for decorations) and Wixlab was put in a scene where he was caught chatting with his 'new' girlfriend on Fatbook; a social networking site. I also had Wix in the bushes, behind Wixlab and she was crying for what Wixlab had done. I added effects and a few stickers onto this submission to make it look much "dramatic".
Thank you!
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*The submission is supposed to appear as : I came across an idea, where I had Wixlab and Wix in the bushes (which those bushes were actually flowers for decorations) and Wixlab was put in a scene where he was caught chatting with his 'new' girlfriend on Fatbook; a social networking site. I also had Wix in the bushes, behind Wixlab and she was crying for what Wixlab had done. I added effects and a few stickers onto this submission to make it look much "dramatic".
- *The submission is supposed to appear as : I came across an idea, where I had Wixlab and Wix in the bushes (which those bushes were actually flowers for decorations) and Wixlab was put in a scene where he was caught chatting with his 'new' girlfriend on Fatbook; a social networking site.
- I also had Wix in the bushes, behind Wixlab and she was crying for what Wixlab had done.
- I added effects and a few stickers onto this submission to make it look much "dramatic".
- Sorry, I had to cut them into phrases since they couldn't appear in a long form.
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*The submission is supposed to appear as :
I came across an idea, where I had Wixlab and Wix in the bushes (which those bushes were actually flowers for decorations) and Wixlab was put in a scene where he was caught
chatting with his 'new' girlfriend on Fatbook; a social networking site.
I also had Wix in the bushes, behind Wixlab and she was cry
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