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Vsuresh Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Grammatical errors

Hi

Can you help me the grammaical errors in this paragraph? The content is actually a part of a letter for a Physical Education Teacher job.

I would like to apply for a post of a physical education teacher in your institution. I would like to share with you that I have a considerable level of expertise and experience in training the students in basketball, volleyball, and badminton. I am very much hopeful that the passion I carry for sports and the interest I have in training the students in all kinds of activities related to my profession, will certainly enable me be successful in work and thereby bring commendable rewards to the institution.

I have herewith attached my resume for your kind perusal.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.
  

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I would like to apply for the post of physical education teacher at your institution. I have considerable expertise and experience in training students in basketball, volleyball, and badminton , and I think that my passion for sports and for training young people in sports and related activities is what makes me successful in my work and a credit to the organization. I have attached my resume for your consideration.

  • I would like to apply for the post of physical education teacher at your institution.
  • I have considerable expertise and experience in training students in basketball, volleyball, and badminton , and I think that my passion for sports and for training young people in sports and related activities is what makes me successful in my work and a credit to the organization.
  • I have attached my resume for your consideration.
  • Thank you very much for reviewing my application.
  • If you have further questions or concerns, please contact me at Email Removed or [phone number].
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I would like to apply for the post of physical education teacher at your institution.

I have considerable expertise and experience in training students in basketball, volleyball, and badminton, and I think that my passion for sports and for training young people in sports and related activities is what makes me s
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This is a very big help! Thank you very much, Mister Micawber.

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