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Myvi Posted 15 years ago
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5th May 1986 is a historic date for Lili Way. On that day she was born in Tebrau. She had her early education at Primary School PetalingI and continued it at Secondary School PetalingII and after form three, she registered at Secondary School Begawan in Tebrau.
After end school days, she furthered her education at Tebrau Matriculation College in life science course for one year. Then, she got an offer to further her study at University of Egypt sponsored by Nasional Science Fellowship and graduated in 2009 with Bachelor of Science with Honours in Chemistry. Currently, she enrolled in her final semester of Master of the Organic Chemistry program at University of Egypt as well.
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5th May 1986 is a historic date for Lili Way. On that day she was born in Tebrau. She had her early education at Primary School PetalingI and continued it at Secondary School PetalingII and after form three, she registered at Secondary School Begawan in Tebrau.
After end school days, she furthered her education at Tebrau Matriculation College in life science course for one year. Then, she got an offer to further her study at University of Egypt sponsored by Nasional Science Fellowship and graduated in 2009 with Bachelor of Science with Honours in Chemistry. Currently, she enrolled in her final semester of Master of the Organic Chemistry program at University of Egypt as well.
Thanks a lot...
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Sorry, but it is too over-blown, myvi. Be simple and direct: Lili Way was born in Tebrau on May 5th, 1986. She was educated at Petaling I Primary School, Petaling II Secondary School , and Begawan Secondary School in Tebrau.
- Sorry, but it is too over-blown, myvi.
- Be simple and direct: Lili Way was born in Tebrau on May 5th, 1986.
- She was educated at Petaling I Primary School, Petaling II Secondary School , and Begawan Secondary School in Tebrau.
- She then studied life science at Tebrau Matriculation College for one year before accepting a National Science Fellowship at the University of Egypt.
- She graduated in 2009 with a Bachelor of Science with Honours in Chemistry.
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Sorry, but it is too over-blown, myvi. Be simple and direct:
Lili Way was born in Tebrau on May 5th, 1986. She was educated at Petaling I Primary School, Petaling II Secondary School, and Begawan Secondary School in Tebrau.
She then studied life science at Tebrau Matriculation College for one year before accepting
Lili Way was born in Tebrau on May 5th, 1986. She was educated at Petaling I Primary School, Petaling II Secondary School, and Begawan Secondary School in Tebrau.
She then studied life science at Tebrau Matriculation College for one year before accepting
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