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Chris2010 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Grammatical Correctness

would like to know if the following sentence is grammatically correct...especially "he was trained as, and then became "

"After graduating, he was trained as, and then became a professional photographer, a profession that he continues to enjoy practicing today."

Thanks!
  

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After graduating, he was trained as , and then became a , professional photographer, a profession that he continues to enjoy practicing today With the pair of red commas. Or without them .

  • After graduating, he was trained as , and then became a , professional photographer, a profession that he continues to enjoy practicing today With the pair of red commas.
  • Or without them .
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After graduating, he was trained as, and then became a, professional photographer, a profession that he continues to enjoy practicing today

With the pair of red commas.

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