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N2332858 Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
Grammatical Corrections
Dear Teachers,
Could you pick up ungrammatical or unclearly sentences to correct?
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1. If we keep learning and introspecting minds, we will keep away from unnecessary suffering.
2. We can act out our goals by our hands.
3.When we realize the concept of cause and consequence and go further to do our best in the present, we take composed attitude toward our futures.
4.If one comprehends a person’s success doesn’t all rely on personal efforts, one will keep humble in times of one’s success.
5. We respect views that differ from us.
6.Most part of our lives is in our minds and hands.
By Yang Chih-Chieh
Could you pick up ungrammatical or unclearly sentences to correct?
Thank You Very Much!!!
1. If we keep learning and introspecting minds, we will keep away from unnecessary suffering.
2. We can act out our goals by our hands.
3.When we realize the concept of cause and consequence and go further to do our best in the present, we take composed attitude toward our futures.
4.If one comprehends a person’s success doesn’t all rely on personal efforts, one will keep humble in times of one’s success.
5. We respect views that differ from us.
6.Most part of our lives is in our minds and hands.
By Yang Chih-Chieh
Top answer
Hi Yang Chih-Chieh. I have tried to keep changes to a minimum. 1.
- Hi Yang Chih-Chieh.
- I have tried to keep changes to a minimum.
- 1.
- If we keep learning and remain introspective, we will avoid unnecessary suffering.
- 2.
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Hi Yang Chih-Chieh.
I have tried to keep changes to a minimum.
1. If we keep learning and remain introspective, we will avoid unnecessary suffering.
2. We can act out our goals using our hands.
3.When we realize the concept of cause and consequence, and go further to do our best in the present, we gain a composed attitude toward our future.
4.If one comprehends that
I have tried to keep changes to a minimum.
1. If we keep learning and remain introspective, we will avoid unnecessary suffering.
2. We can act out our goals using our hands.
3.When we realize the concept of cause and consequence, and go further to do our best in the present, we gain a composed attitude toward our future.
4.If one comprehends that
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Hi Cheers
Thank You Very Much!!!
In the first sentence, " If we keep learning and introspective minds,........"
The usage is ungrammatical or weird?
Charlie
Thank You Very Much!!!
In the first sentence, " If we keep learning and introspective minds,........"
The usage is ungrammatical or weird?
Charlie
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