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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Grammatical check, please?
Hello,
In the following sentence I'm trying to be descriptive and persuasive, but does it look a little bit confusing? I wonder if it is grammatically correct as well.
"Discover female beauty featured in fashion and publication(s), from classified photography & arts to model profiles & portfolios."
"female beauty" as in female physical attractiveness.
Is the word "classified" is an equivalent word to "curated", or should I just use "curated" instead?
Thank you for your help.
Serra
In the following sentence I'm trying to be descriptive and persuasive, but does it look a little bit confusing? I wonder if it is grammatically correct as well.
"Discover female beauty featured in fashion and publication(s), from classified photography & arts to model profiles & portfolios."
"female beauty" as in female physical attractiveness.
Is the word "classified" is an equivalent word to "curated", or should I just use "curated" instead?
Thank you for your help.
Serra
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I don't understand what this is all about. Are you advertising some kind of class or business? Clive
- I don't understand what this is all about.
- Are you advertising some kind of class or business?
- Clive
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I don't understand what this is all about. Are you advertising some kind of class or business?
Clive
Clive
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