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Fanllytee Posted 20 years ago
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Grammatical check & shorten the message on SMS, URGENT PLEASE HELP

FYI. 2 complaining letters were r'cd today from AFAM cc. to you w rgds to
1) Inefficiency of the maintenance company engaged by ABC
2) Un-hygienic & Filthy conditions at ABC cafeteria
Another fax was r'cd from Cindy of Realtors attn to Mr. XXX(tenant) cc to you w rgds to U-That condo.- advise on landlord's bank a/c.
  

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Hi, FYI. 2 complaining letters were r'cd today from AFAM cc. to you w rgds to 1) Inefficiency of the maintenance company engaged by ABC 2) Un-hygienic & Filthy conditions at ABC cafeteria Another fax was r'cd from Cindy of Realtors attn to Mr.

  • Hi, FYI.
  • 2 complaining letters were r'cd today from AFAM cc.
  • to you w rgds to 1) Inefficiency of the maintenance company engaged by ABC 2) Un-hygienic & Filthy conditions at ABC cafeteria Another fax was r'cd from Cindy of Realtors attn to Mr.
  • - advise on landlord's bank a/c.
  • I don't see how you can make this much shorter.
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Hi,

FYI. 2 complaining letters were r'cd today from AFAM cc. to you w rgds to
1) Inefficiency of the maintenance company engaged by ABC
2) Un-hygienic & Filthy conditions at ABC cafeteria
Another fax was r'cd from Cindy of Realtors attn to Mr. ***(tenant) cc to you w rgds to U-That condo.- advise on landlord's bank a/c.


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