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Towel cpu 271 Posted 8 years ago
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Grammatic
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Make music we can all dance to together, not politics that we are divided apart by.
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Hard to say. There are problems. You don't really "make" politics, so the aphorism limps a bit.
- Hard to say.
- There are problems.
- You don't really "make" politics, so the aphorism limps a bit.
- "Divided apart" is redundant.
- "Divided by" is better.
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Hard to say. There are problems. You don't really "make" politics, so the aphorism limps a bit. "Divided apart" is redundant. "Divided by" is better.
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