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Knjiga Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Grammar/vocabulary
Could you please check the following sentences for grammar mistakes? Did I use articles correctly? Was my choice of words appropriate?
From the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging. Indefatigably, some of us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstorming ideas. Above mentioned and many more quires sent ripples through our learning community, sparking long, impassioned discussions. Doubtless, the value of Phase I was being examined and assessed.
From the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging. Indefatigably, some of us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstorming ideas. Above mentioned and many more quires sent ripples through our learning community, sparking long, impassioned discussions. Doubtless, the value of Phase I was being examined and assessed.
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Hello Knjiga, You might want to look again at the parts I've emboldened: knjiga From the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging. Indefatigably , some of us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstorming ideas . Above mentioned and many more quires sent ripples through our learning community, sparking long, impassioned discussions.
- Hello Knjiga, You might want to look again at the parts I've emboldened: knjiga From the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging.
- Indefatigably , some of us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstorming ideas .
- Above mentioned and many more quires sent ripples through our learning community, sparking long, impassioned discussions.
- Doubtless , the value of Phase I was being examined and assessed.
- Best wishes, MrP
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Hello Knjiga,
You might want to look again at the parts I've emboldened:
You might want to look again at the parts I've emboldened:
knjigaFrom the outset of our project on transportation it was obvious that new, revolutionary currents of thought were emerging. Indefatigably, some of us inquired about why we have to do Phase I, why we don’t start researching the topic of our interest right after brainstor
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