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Spring Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Grammar/vocabulary
Dear Teachers, could you please check the following sentence for grammar and vocabualry?
Your infinite cheerfulness and kindness, like the luminous rays of a never-setting sun, inspire only the best in all of us.
Thank you very much for your help!
Spring
Your infinite cheerfulness and kindness, like the luminous rays of a never-setting sun, inspire only the best in all of us.
Thank you very much for your help!
Spring
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Hello Spring
Yes, it sounds fine to me too. Some people might say that 'luminous' is already included in 'rays', and so 'luminous rays' is a tautology.
MrP
Yes, it sounds fine to me too. Some people might say that 'luminous' is already included in 'rays', and so 'luminous rays' is a tautology.
MrP
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