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Johnie Posted 8 years ago
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Engineers who develop something are responsible for ensuring its customers are safe by providing useful precautions. A good example would be an electrical engineer, who designed a product, would be responsible for informing its users of potential hazards and precautions to take while using it.

  

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johnie Engineers who develop something various things are responsible for ensuring that they are safe for the customers by providing them with necessary precautions. A good example would be in the case of an electrical engineer;he would be responsible for informing his users of potential hazards of the product he has designed and the precautions they should take while using it.

  • johnie Engineers who develop something various things are responsible for ensuring that they are safe for the customers by providing them with necessary precautions.
  • A good example would be in the case of an electrical engineer;he would be responsible for informing his users of potential hazards of the product he has designed and the precautions they should take while using it.
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johnieEngineers who develop something various things are responsible for ensuring that they are safe for the customers by providing them with necessary precautions. A good example would be in the case of an electrical engineer;he would be responsible for informing his users of potential hazards of the product he has designed and the precautions they should tak
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johnieEngineers who develop something are responsible for ensuring its customers

I disagree completely. Engineers are seldom one-person shops who design, test, manufacture, market, sell and support an end-use product. It is the manufacturer that is responsible for product testing and ensuring that a product is accompanied by appropriate safety informa

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