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Judges wear black priestly robes because it represents the planet Saturn; the God of money, banking, and [especially] law. The planet Saturn was worshiped by the Ancient Phoenician Canaanites. Each one of the planets and each one of the Gods were associated with a different color. Saturn was associated with the color black, so the priests wore black robes. The symbol of Saturn, long before the Hebrew people were ever in Canaan, was the six pointed star. On the other hand, today we call it the Star of David but the truth is there is no such thing as the Star of David, because it is the Star of Saturn. Another example that is based on the God Saturn is the symbol of the Sheriff Department, which is the six pointed star (law).
  

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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage: Judges wear black priestly robes because it represents the planet Satu rn; th e *** of money, banking, and [especially] law. The planet Saturn was worshiped by the Ancient Phoenician Canaanites. Each one of the planets and each one of th e Gods were associated with a different color.

  • I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage: Judges wear black priestly robes because it represents the planet Satu rn; th e *** of money, banking, and [especially] law.
  • The planet Saturn was worshiped by the Ancient Phoenician Canaanites.
  • Each one of the planets and each one of th e Gods were associated with a different color.
  • Saturn was associated with the color black, so the priests wore black robes.
  • The symbol of Saturn, long before the Hebrew people were ever in Canaan, was the six pointed star.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage:

Judges wear black priestly robes because it represents the planet Saturn; the *** of money, banking, and [especially] law. The planet Saturn was worshiped by the Ancient Phoenician Canaanites. Each one of the planets and each one of the Gods were ass
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well can you at least suggest something for the underlined problems?
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