Grammar | Topic: Who you wanna be in the future
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When I turned 20, I decided to make a plan for my next 5 years. And then I realized that there're many things to do to achieve the targets. Even though in my opinion, it's not too hard but I wonder how persistence I have to finish it.
When I was a child, I told mom that I wanna be a successful woman who can pay all of my family travel bills.
Now I'm a senior student and I know that I need a direction to fast as soon as possible. Then, I find Nguyen Phi Van an intelligent young woman. I have followed her facebook. I read her book. I learned from her biography. I hope that in the next 5 years I will be a woman as well as her.
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Vy Khánh Lê I did a short paragraph but I don't know it's right or not. I need your hand, please help me to fix my mistakes First of all, the topic is incorrect. Grammar | Topic: Who do you want to wanna be in the future?
- Vy Khánh Lê I did a short paragraph but I don't know it's right or not.
- I need your hand, please help me to fix my mistakes First of all, the topic is incorrect.
- Grammar | Topic: Who do you want to wanna be in the future?
- When I turned 20, I decided to make a five-year plan.
- for my next 5 years .
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Vy Khánh LêI did a short paragraph but I don't know it's right or not. I need your hand, please help me to fix my mistakes
First of all, the topic is incorrect.
Grammar | Topic: Who do you want to wanna be in the future?
When I turned 20, I d
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