grammar test

I have been struggling with this grammar test. I have included my choices. This is supposed to follow AP format, which apparently I don't know.
1. c 2. a. 3. c 4. b 5. c 6. a 7. c 8. d 9. c 10. d

1. After being marinated for 2 hours, and then flash fried, the Smith's enjoyed there Alaskan King Crab that they were looking forward to it all week.
After being marinated for two hours, and then flash fried, the Smiths enjoyed their Alaskan king crab that they were looking forward to all week.
After being marinated for two hours and then flash fried, the Smiths enjoyed their Alaskan King Crab that they were looking forward to all week.
After it had been marinated for two hours and then flash fried, the Smiths enjoyed their Alaskan king crab that they had been looking forward to all week.
After it had been marinated for two hours, and then flash fried, the Smiths enjoyed their Alaskan King Crab that they were looking forward to all week.

2. My cat, (he's a Turkish van and so cute!) helps me edit, by slapping at the comma errors on the screen.
My Turkish Van helps me edit by slapping at the comma errors on the screen.
My cat helps me edit by slapping at the comma errors on the screen.
My cat (he's a Turkish van, and so cute!) helps me edit by slapping at the comma errors on the screen.
My Turkish van cat, who is so cute helps me edit, by slapping at the comma errors on the screen.

3. Depending on the type of tool you use depends on the job you use the tool for.
Depending on the type of tool you use, depends on the job you use the tool for.
Depending on the type of tool you use, depends on the job, for which you use the tool.
The type of tool you use depends on the job.
The type of tool, depending on the job, depends on what you use the tool for.

4. When tempted to fight fire with fire remember that the Fire Department usually uses water.
When tempted to fight fire with fire, remember that the Fire department usually uses water.
When tempted to fight fire with fire, remember that the Fire Department usually uses water.
When tempted to fight fire with fire remember that the fire department usually uses water.
When tempted to fight fire with fire, remember that the fire department usually uses water.

5. To clean you're cloths you must put them in the washer and add soap.
To clean your cloths, you must put them in the washer, and add soap.
To clean you're clothes you must put them in the washer and add soap.
To clean your clothes, you must put them in the washer and add soap.
To clean your clothes you must put them in the washer, and add soap.

6. Because I to play music it's hard for me to find a musician who's music has an effect on me.
Because I too play music, it's hard for me to find a musician whose music has an effect on me.
Because I too play music it's hard for me to find a musician whose music has an affect on me.
Because I, too, play music, it's hard for me to find a musician whose music has an effect on me.
Because I, too, play music it's hard for me to find a musician who's music has an effect on me.

7. Dripping with sauce his mother presented the baked ham.
His Mother presented the driping with sauce baked ham.
Dripping with sauce, his mother presented the baked ham.
His mother presented the baked ham, dripping with sauce.
His mother presented the baked ham; dripping with sauce.

8. From Newcastle to Leicester. North of London is the place to be.
From Newcastle to Leicester; North of London is the place to be.
From Newcastle to Leicester: north of London is the place to be.
From Newcastle, to Leicester, north of London is the place to be.
From Newcastle to Leicester, north of London is the place to be.

9. All of the sudden my husband's secratary decided to stop giving him my telephone massages which made me VERY angry, but far be it from me to tell her how to do her job.
All of a sudden my husband's secratary decided to stop giving him my telephone massages, which made me VERY angry, but far be it from me to tell her how to do her job.
All of a sudden, my husband's secretary decided to stop giving him my telephone messages, which made me very angry, but far be it from me to tell her how to do her job.
All of the sudden my husband's secratary decided to stop giving him my telephone massages which made me VERY angry, but far be it from me to tell her how to do her job.
All of a sudden my husband's secretary decided to stop giving him my telephone messages which made me very angry but far be it from me to tell her how to do her job.

10. Irregardless of you're feelings, I'm going to take the last orange and enjoy it thoroughly.
Irregardless of your feelings, I'm going to take the last orange, and enjoy it thoroughly.
Regardless of you're feelings, I'm going to take the last orange, and enjoy it thoroughly.
Irregardless of your feelings, I'm going to take the last orange and enjoy it thoroughly.
Regardless of your feelings, I'm going to take the last orange and enjoy it thoroughly.