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Is my sentence grammatically correct?1.Everybody in my class hates Literature but none more than I.2. Content of news mainly revolves around dysfunctional phenomena such as accidents and crime, and even more so, say wars and famines.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Nh?t Bình1.Everybody in my class hates Literature but none more than I.

"Literature" would only be capitalized if you meant the name of a course at school. I am tempted to put a comma before "but", but it is optional.

Nh?t Bình2. Content of news mainly revolves around dysfunctional phenomena such as accidents and crime, and even more so, say wars and famines.

I can't say I am sure what you mean, but maybe "The content of the news mainly consists of sensational phenomema such as accidents and crime, and even more so wars and famines." The comma before "and" is there to aid reading.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Nh?t Bình1. Everybody in my class hates literature but none more than I.

That is very formal writing.

Nh?t BìnhContent of news mainly revolves around dysfunctional phenomena such as accidents and crime, and even more so, say wars and famines.

Dysfunctional is attributed to families where the members do not get along with each other.
Phenomena is more used for very off, unexplained and naturally-occurring events.

"revolves around" is not very good in that context, either.

The news is mainly about sensational local events such as fatal accidents and criminal activities, but also international tragedies like wars and famines.

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