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Fuchsia olive Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Grammar & Sentence structure

Hi dear friends,

I am improving my English writing skills and I wrote the sentence below , I would like to know the grammatical correction and a native opinion,

Thanks in advance !

"The fundamental principle of veterinary science education is to raise conciseness about animal health care issues and animal welfare, ethic problems among veterinarian candidates."

  

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I would write this. It is very important in veterinary science education to raise awareness about animal welfare and the ethical treatment of animals.

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  • I would write this.
  • It is very important in veterinary science education to raise awareness about animal welfare and the ethical treatment of animals.
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I would write this.

It is very important in veterinary science education to raise awareness about animal welfare and the ethical treatment of animals.
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