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1. I have the public administration as my academic background (graduated in Public administration and now teaching introductory courses on Public Administration at a University) which is more in the public (government) sector or public organization oriented, but in private org, conducted thesis on NGOs and have prior working experience in the private organization. So, apparently, I have some sorts of connection and acquaintance with the major actors (government entity, NGOs, private organizations and think tank/civil societies) of public policy and public administration, either academically or professionally; and this might give me additional advantages while I will be studying public policy

2. Considering my plan to obtain PhD, I believe with my teaching ability I can introduce courses or seminars on Public Administration and Public Policy, especially from developing country context.
I cordially ask you to consider favorably my application for scholarship as well as for research or teaching assistantships. My teaching experience focusing on public administration, Public Policy, particularly from south Asian perspective, may be a valuable source of resources for the department

3.My study period at Carleton will not only provide me scholastic input, but also provide me an opportunity to explore new cultures, meeting people

Teechr · Accepted Answer

1. My academic background is in public administration which I now teach at introductory level at XYZ University. However, I have also conducted research on NGOs, and I have solid work experience in the private sector.

2. I can teach courses on public administration and public policy, especially from a developing-country perspective. Therefore, I cordially ask you to consider favorably my application for a scholarship as well as for research or teaching assistantships. My teaching experience focusing on public administration and public policy, particularly from a South Asian perspective, may be a valuable resource for the department.

3. Studying at Carleton will not only enhance my academic knowledge, but also provide me an opportunity to explore other cultures and meet new people.

Mizanur · Answer

Asking your kind help in correcting follwoing sentences in terms of grammar and sentence formulation

1. I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background would help me to achieve my future career goal which is working and doing research on the nonprofit organization. I am now devoted to teaching profession and currently teaching at a University in Bangladesh. I am the person who loves to be a part of various organizations. I love to work for different students run clubs that has a good match with my field like: diversity club, social entrepreneur club.

2. I would like to look at the role of the nonprofit sector in “Agenda Settings” and “Policy Formulation” of North American public policy framework. The tentative title of my proposed study is “The Engagement of Non-profit Sector in Public Policy in North America : Learning for Nonprofit Leaders of Developing Countries”

3. How Non-profit organizations do play role in the Agenda Settings and Policy Formulation’

4. What lesson developing countries’ NGOs leaders can obtain from the North American nonprofit sector in terms of agenda setting and influence public policy formulation?

5. I have gained many transferable skills from my different job experiences. As a reward for my dedication to work, I was selected from whole Bangladesh as one of fifty young professionals to participate in the ‘2nd BYL Leadership Summit

thanks a lot.

Mizanur

Teechr · Answer

Mizanur I'm asking for your kind help in correcting the following sentences in terms of grammar and ~~sentence~~ formulation.

Mizanur1. I am strongly convinced that my scholastic background would help me to achieve my future career goal which is ~~working and doing~~ to work and do research ~~on the~~ in a nonprofit organization. I am ~~now~~ devoted to the teaching profession, and I currently teach ~~ing~~ at a university in Bangladesh. I value variety and diversity in my work environment, and I help with many ~~am the person who loves to be a part of various organizations. I love to work for different~~ student-run clubs ~~that has a good match with my field like:~~ such as the Diversity Club and the Social Entrepreneur Club.

Mizanur2. I would like to ~~look at~~ research the role of the nonprofit sector in “Agenda Settings” and “Policy Formulation” of North American public policy frameworks. The tentative title of my proposed study is “The Engagement of Non-profit Sector in Public Policy in North America : Learning for Nonprofit Leaders of Developing Countries.”

Mizanur3. How nonprofit organizations do play a role in ~~the~~ "agenda setting" and "policy formulation."

Mizanur4. What lesson can developing countries’ NGO leaders ~~can obtain~~ learn from the North American nonprofit sector in terms of agenda setting and influencing public policy formulation?

Mizanur5. I have gained many transferable skills from my different job experiences. As a reward for my dedication to work, I was selected ~~from whole Bangladesh~~ as one of fifty young professionals in Bangladesh to participate in the ~~‘2nd~~ Second BYL Leadership Summit.

MizanurThanks a lot.

Mizanur · Answer

Thank you very much.

Please help in the correcting following sentence and formulation, if you able to manage sometime for me.

I applied to numerous positions in nonprofit sectors in Bangladesh including research and other administrative and managerial positions. I have not been offered any suitable position, even I was not invited to face initial stage of recruitment. The situation can be explained by the fierce job competition coupled with favoritism and nepotism in hiring people. NGO sector in Bangladesh is not beyond this allegation. In spite of having relevant academic background with good grade, I struggled to find a position in the nonprofit sector.
I could not wait longer to find the desired position, and I started full-time job right after finishing my undergrad.

3. The underlying point is that I worked for different types of organizations except non-profit organization.
This situation had an impact on my decision to pursue study at the University of B. My home university had an institutional collaboration with the University of B. I was thinking that having an international degree from abroad would increase my chance of employability in non-profit sector. By completing MPA degree from xyz department, I have attained a solid research background. I had courses in research methodology, research field and design. On the top, I have done extensive field work in Bangladesh in order to collect data for the dissertation.

4. Along with teaching, I am interested in working as a free-lance consultant for NGOs/development agencies. Conducting research on issues related to nonprofit sector can be a good way to be engaged in ngo sector. Owing to my academic background and professional experience, I am interested in‘Nonprofit Leadership’ cluster

In modern public policy spectrum, non-profit sector plays essential roles at different levels. NGOs are nowadays participating in international policy level meeting as well as at regional and domestic level.
Q1: How do non-profit sector expand their issue (/agenda) to reach informal and formal public agenda. Q3: What instruments non-profit organizations do employ to influence policy formulation phase

The study will explore every form in terms of generating lessons for nonprofit leaders in developing countries. During the analysis, it will be kept in mind that both context of a highly developed country Canada and developing countries are not same politically and culturally

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